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Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to you to request details about your hotel and its services. I plan to stay at your establishment in one month’s time and there are a number of points which I would be grateful if you could clarify for me. This will allow me to plan my holiday in your country more effectively and thereby give me the opportunity to maximise my vacation time.
First of all, could you please inform me as to what the current daily rate is for one standard room. If the quoted price is satisfactory then I would like to proceed to reserve the room for one week from the first of March to the eighth of March.
Secondly, I would appreciate it if you could additionally provide me with details of what the hotel facilities are at your establishment. Could you please confirm for me that you have a gym and a swimming pool for the use of the hotel guests.
Finally, I am interested in visiting the local tourist sites and so would greatly appreciate it if you could provide me with details of any excursions which your hotel may run to these destinations.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Bestregards,
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1)Представьтесь, кто вы и по какой причине пишите
I am writing to you request details about your hotel and its services. I plan to stay at your establishment in one month’s time and there are a number of points which I would be grateful if you could clarify for me. This will allow me to plan my holiday in your country more effectively and thereby give me the opportunity to maximise my vacation time.
2) Напишите про три пункта, указанных в задании
First of all, could you please inform me as to what the current daily rate is for one standard room. If the quoted price is satisfactory then I would like to proceed to reserve the room for one week from the first of March to the eighth of March.
Secondly, I would appreciate it if you could additionally provide me with details of what the hotel facilities are at your establishment. Could you please confirm for me that you have a gym and a swimming pool for the use of the hotel guests.
Finally, I am interested in visiting the local tourist sites and so would greatly appreciate it if you could provide me with details of any excursions which your hotel may run to these destinations.
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I look forward to receiving your reply.
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